Send your Google Doc and get your essay back with edits right where you write: small fixes as suggestions you can accept, and comments on the bigger things, like story, emotion and why this school.
On my first night at the shelter I didn't know what to say, so I. So I just listened while he talked about his daughter. That experience taught me a lot about people.
Small fixes, like a run-on, a tense slip or a clunky word, arrive as Google Docs suggestions. Click accept or reject; nothing is rewritten behind your back.
Where a line loses me, rushes past the important moment, or lands perfectly, you'll know, in plain language and attached to the exact sentence.
If an essay needs a different opening, a stronger ending or a real story instead of a list, you'll get that up front, not buried in line edits.
After you submit, you get a link that shows when your essays are received, in review and ready, with the expected date.
What I edit: personal statements, secondary essays, activity descriptions and most meaningful experiences.
One real moment beats a list of duties. Your activities section already has the list.
Not "it was rewarding," but what happened and what it did to you.
Each paragraph should pull the next one in. No jumps, no deep ends.
Get to the story fast, and finish like you mean it.
Every secondary is read against that school's mission, so your own experiences tie to what they care about.
Honest is good; unflattering by accident isn't. Lines that undercut you get flagged.
You're throwing me in the deep end here. Lead me in.
on a jumpy transitionThis is the heart of it. Slow down and give me that moment.
on a rushed storyMake it more of an ending, and tie it to why this school.
on a closing lineShare your Google Doc with me as Editor. Every edit still arrives as a suggestion you accept or reject. See how, step by step.
Your name, email, the link, the schools, and a turnaround. You'll get a private status link right away.
Suggestions and comments appear right in your essay, and your status page switches to Edits ready.
Work through the edits, then submit your next draft the same way when you're ready.
No. Small fixes come as suggestions you accept or reject; anything about content or story is a comment, and you do the rewriting. It stays your essay, in your voice.
Personal statements (AMCAS, AACOMAS and TMDSAS), secondary essays, activity descriptions and most meaningful experiences.
Your essay stays in your own Google Doc, and the edits are made there. The form only stores your name, email, the doc link, the schools and the dates.
Yes. Submit each new draft the same way. One status link shows all your requests.
Send your essays and I'll get back to you with pricing for what you need before anything starts.
Share your Google Doc, pick standard or rush, and follow along on your private status page.
Submit your essays